Peer Review Inquiry paper

Spencer- I thought that your paper has a really interesting and controversial topic and the paper itself has very voice. This is a topic that is always being debated and gets more and more controversial as the debate goes on. I thought all aspects of the paper were very well written. I do think that paper is missing research that will help your credibility and help the reader understand the question.

Marlon- This is a really interesting question to be asking. I really liked the introduction that you had. It caught my attention and got me very interested in the paper. I think the body of the paper itself could include a lot more analysis of these curse words like why is it that people use them and what they literally mean vs. what we use them as.

Sapna- I think you have a really interesting topic to discuss. The introduction does a very good job of clearly stating the question of the inquiry to the reader however, I think that it could be improved by adding some personal anecdotes or stories from other people about burritos to give a good hook to the reader. You seem to have done a lot of research into the history of burritos. This is good and it helps the reader get a good understanding of burritos. I do think that there may be a little bit too much of this however. Since the question of the paper is to find the perfect burrito, I think there needs to be more personal fieldwork (description of eating burritos). I noticed that in your conclusion, you didn’t clearly mention whether or not you found the answer to your question. Being an inquiry paper, I think your conclusion should include this. Overall this is a very good rough draft and there is a lot of good information to work with and mold.