For the comparison assignment, I read student 2’s and student
7’s essays. The first thing that brought me into these two essays and essay is
the titles. Student 2 had a very good title called “The fountain of youth”.
This got me very interested in what this essay might be about. While this title
was very grabbing, the other title I didn’t think was quite as good in terms of
bringing the reader in. The title of student 7’s essay was simply “Abu Ghraib”.
This told me what the essay was going to be about but didn’t necessarily leave
me with a desire to want to continue reading. As for the essays themselves, I thought
both were very well written features in which I feel that I’ve learned
something. Both had strong introductions that got me pulled into the essay. I
could see that a large amount of research and time was put into making these
authors experts on the topic. Something that I took away from these essays was
the technique of being able to be informative and scientific while still making
the essay very enjoyable to the reader.
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