Kelly’s review of MMLP2
critiques:
-I
found myself at many points throughout paper questioning whether or not you
enjoyed the album or not.
-As
someone who is not familiar with much of Eminem’s work or personal life, I
tended to be very confused when you were talking about the events in his life
and references to his past albums.
-I
thought that you had great descriptions of some of the aspects of the album.
McKenzie’s review of Pearl Harbor critique’s:
-I
thought you did a good job at explaining the positive parts of the movie and
explaining why in your opinion that the critiques were not valid.
-I
thought there may have been a bit too much plot summary.
-Some
sentences were a bit too long and run on like but that can be fixed in editing.
Spencer’s review critique
I
really enjoyed reading this review. It was very well written with little to no
mistakes or poorly written sentences. You had great voice in this review which
I felt established good credibility. I loved that you analyzed and picked apart
every aspect of the movie from the score to the cinematography. A couple things
that I feel you could add would be to add some sources from other critics.
Whether they liked the movie or not, adding some other opinions and then either
agreeing with them or disagreeing with them and backing up your point will add
to the overall credibility of your writing. Again, I loved that you analyzed
all of the parts of the movie however I do think that some nice flowing
transitions could be added between the different sections. Some of the
transitions feel a bit clunky to me. Overall, really good job on the review
though. It definitely made me interested in the movie.
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