Friday, September 12, 2014

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Going into college, I knew I was going have to make an upgrade on the laptop that I had. I had been using a three year old Macbook Pro which I had loved for what it could do for me, but being in a technology governed business path with an engineering minor, I knew it wouldn’t be able to do the job I needed it to. So I began looking through countless reviews of laptops explaining the pros and cons of each machine. These amazing new machines seemed to be an extension of these owners and that is exactly what I wanted. I wanted a strong machine that could do everything I needed it to do, when I needed it to do it. After searching for hours a day, I narrowed my search to two different brands, ASUS and Lenovo. Both leaders in the market, I knew they would both be able to produce computers that would do what I wanted. This is where the truly powerful reviews came in. I needed to differentiate which would be better for me. Ultimately, I decided on the Lenovo Y50 and I could not be happier. The reviews that I read were the driving force behind this important decision and now it is my turn to help some lost soul find their true mechanized soul mate with my review of this magnificent, motorized machine.
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In college, the technology that one uses can determine many outcomes of their experience. Whether that’s grade, friends, or simply overall experience. This is why it is extremely important to choose the correct technology, such as new laptops, when coming into college. This is where reviews come in. Before purchasing any new gadget, the consumer should read up on plenty of reviews of different products to see which would be the best. A good review needs to be thorough yet simple enough for the reader to understand. In my personal experience, reviews of laptops can vary very much and that is why it is very important to scour the internet for different sources and opinions on the product of choice. I have recently purchased a new Lenovo Y50 laptop. I have generally been very happy with my experience so far. I believe that with all of the new products coming out, we as consumers must contribute our opinions to help other potential buyers make the best decision they can when buying a laptop. In this review I will be discussing the specs, feel and raw experience that I have had with my Lenovo Y50.

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